Saturday, August 31, 2013

Updates

Hey, guys! I just want to know what you think of all my posts. Please, please comment about anything! I would love to hear from you!
 I also want you to know that my friend Molly has a blog called uppermichigirl10.blogspot.com and would love you to go and see what is happening in her life. I also have another friend (who is my best friend) Chickadee who has a blog about american girl dolls so check that out. The web address is yoopergirl13.blogspot.com.
 Just a little thing that is coming soon: Victoria Hope Talean (Part 3). I am probably posting that tomorrow,so be here for that. I would love it if you could email or comment about what you think of my book or suggest ideas of what I should blog about, so please feel free to. I would love hearing from you like I said.
So remember, go on my friends blogs and check them out, comment or email me, and tomorrow I am posting part 3 of Victoria Hope Talean so be here.
I think that is everything, so bye!                         Blogger,
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Friday, August 30, 2013

Victoria Hope Talean (Part 2)

Makayla jumped down.
"Torie, are you all right?"
" Yeah, Makayla. I'm fine." answered Torie as she stood up.
"Did you slip or something?" asked Makayla.
"No. I jumped off." said Torie honestly.
"Why in the world do you do that? Torie, I wonder about you sometimes." stated Makayla.
Torie ignored her and payed more attention to the wound on her knee. She must have scratched it on a rock when she fell (no jumped) off.
" You wanna go back to your house for lunch now? "  asked Makayla as she examined the scratch.
"Sure, why not? " Torie said as they started to walk away from the dome. She saw a piece of paper on the ground that said, "Life is good". Torie thought about it for a second.
Life is good? I wonder who wrote that. I would say life was decent, because we all sin and the world is a horrible place. Heaven is where I would say life was good, thought Torie. Right then, Makayla spoke. " Torie? Do ever wonder why people believe that the world was just a speck that ' accidentaly ' exploded? I mean that we were once apes? I think that doesn't even make sense! How come we can talk and apes don't? And anyway, things just don't change over the years! Say you plant a pear tree. First it's a pear, then a mix between a pear and an apple, then just an apple in millions of years later. People are crazy! I want to see them do that! It's impossible. " said Makayla speaking her mind as usual.
" I know! I mean where did the speck come from? How did it all explode into millions of things? People are crazy." replied Victoria. Torie loved walking down this street. The houses were so beautiful, not to mention the flowers out front. And to think Torie saw it every day because she lived on this street. East C St.,thought Torie. I love that we even live on this street. I love that we are just down the street to a park, my favorite park.
Torie just couldn't imagine Heaven being so much more beautiful and so much more better! Torie couldn't wait!
Oh Lord, I crave to be in your presence. To talk to you. To see you.
That night she wrote down in her diary," Dear Diary,
 Makayla and I went to the park and I did the stupidest thing. I jumped of the dome. On the way home, shortly after I did my stupid act, I saw a paper saying life was good on the ground. It made me think of how badly this earth has it. When Adam and Eve sinned thousands of years ago, the whole world fell apart- stealing, drugs, abuse, and all of the other things we do. It makes me want to cry out to God. I am so glad he loves me even in all of this mess..."
Torie fell asleep.

Saturday, August 10, 2013

Victoria Hope Talean (Part 1)

"Come on Torie! We're almost there." said Victoria's best friend, Makayla TeKape.
" But it's so disgusting!" said Torie.
 The two girls were at the park climbing the dome.
" Well you can't get down now, we're already half-way up." argued Makayla.
Torie let out a groan. She hated when she agreed to things that she didn't know what they were.
" Makayla, I want to get down." protested Victoria.
"We are already closer to the top. See, only a few more steps." pointed Makayla.
Torie sighed." Fine."
A few moments later they were at the top of the dome.
" What did I tell you?" said Makayla. " It's not the end of the world."
Torie looked at her clothes.
For Victoria being a girly-girl and all, she surprised herself when she left the house wearing a forest green tank and black capris. She didn't even know she owned something that wasn't pink, purple, or white.
Makayla could tell what Torie was thinking most of the time. This was one of the times.
" When did you get that outfit? " asked Makayla. " I like it. "
Makayla was a 13 year old tom-boy, trying to be as tough as she could be,ever since she experienced the awful car accident that killed her mother and brother three years ago.
She had been a nice little girl, trying to be like her big sister, Margrett, who was 14 at the time. Ever since then, until she met Torie, she was a sad, miserable girl who never smiled, nor laughed.
She cried for a year every night, for she wanted her dear mother and older brother back.
She screamed when people tried to comfort her, saying she didn't want them to talk to her.
Then, last year, she met Victoria Talean, who told her that God loved her and wanted her to talk to him, to pour her heart out. She accepted Jesus into her heart and has become Torie's best friend ever since then.
"I didn't even know I had it until this morning." replied Torie.
" Well you should wear it more often." said Makayla knowing what she just said was pointless.
Torie shrugged.
" We could get down now. " suggested Makayla.
Torie nodded.
The girls started going down, Makayla going first.
" Yuck!! It's more dirty over here than it was over there!" complained Victoria.
"Tough up! You are really getting on my nerves!" said Makayla cruelly.
Victoria looked at Makayla. She expected more of her.
Torie looked beneath her through the holes.
Without thinking, she jumped through.
Makayla shrieked.

Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Big News

Hello, girls. To make this blog my own I am going to post sections of a book I am writing. To see the next part of the book you have to come on at least every two weeks. I will start posting my book this weekend. If you have any questions please comment below.          Your blogger,
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